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shineone
12-16-2006, 12:11 AM
niggas want beef ? i'm a butcher, i can bring you some /
i'll fuck you easily like nas' release fucks "kingdom come" /
jay-z's kingdom's done, after black album he said he'll retire /
instead of bowing out with grace, he came back without fire /
with no air like flat tyres, like a hollow tip without impact /
nasir jones releases soon, and THEN y'all can say a king's back /
i'm tired of all those slim macks, slim thugs, lil' waynes, lil' flips /
rappers who got big bling but inside they pants they got lil' dicks /
lil' albums with lil' skits, i'm tired of wack releases /
nas' music so ill, makes me wanna smoke crack with jesus /
nas is a technique genius, ain't no one can fuck with him /
rap's not about 50's muscles, fuck G unit and fuck a gym /
too many rappers who were good nowadays release wack shit /
plastic beats without no cuts, no imagery and no technique /
busta brought the big bang ? shit, stupid talk & dick slang /
"hiphop is dead" - a few more days, THAT'll be the big bang /
oh my god, i see dead people, dead rappers /
signin' dead record deals with dead labels, makin' dead cheddar /
even my dad's better than these dead faggots with dead voices /
you walkin' the walk of death, not of life, makin' dead choices /
you drivin' in dead royces, with dead rims and dead spins /
the picture of your corpse appears in a dead magazine (backspin) /
after death, you'll be relaxin', after death, no more action /
death is the silencer of life, makin' your ribcage and neck spin /
nigga, you're a wack king, who was rulin' way before /
did a excellent retirement lp, then came back with more /
that was your biggest mistake, now hoodrats don't love you /
instead they love QBs god's son, give him one mic, he'll "hov" you /
you signed him to defjam, but he ain't no nigga to earn you stripes /
wait till the release of hiphop is dead, that boy will burn you nice /
in 'pan, you burn like rice, nigga, you lost your burnin' rhymes /
look at nasir jones, thats what i call a nigga with burnin' eyes /

Shadowapocalypse
12-16-2006, 01:36 AM
That's some ill ish son, biggin' up Nas, talkin' real talk...

Except, I'll say it again...

Kingdom Come is a solid album...

T-rade
12-16-2006, 06:01 AM
liked the whole dead talk:
oh my god, i see dead people, dead rappers /
signin' dead record deals with dead labels, makin' dead cheddar /
even my dad's better than these dead faggots with dead voices /
you walkin' the walk of death, not of life, makin' dead choices /
you drivin' in dead royces, with dead rims and dead spins

T-rade
12-16-2006, 06:02 AM
Btw, nice first post

vexed less
12-16-2006, 06:52 AM
damn son u must be sad or bored; no life nigga,
that was straight up dum....u aint know jayz, ,like u got beef with him.....u aint nas, aint no point for ur rap.
shit... if u gonna type sum lyrics type sum shit that got to do with you, yourself...not that idol u luv so damn much, 1

shineone
12-18-2006, 02:15 AM
thanks to shadowapocalypse and t-rade... peace

shineone
12-20-2006, 03:32 AM
come on guys,

27 views and 4 comments ? feeback, please, from those who haven't posted yet...

thanks.

vexed less
12-20-2006, 03:52 AM
come on guys,

27 views and 4 comments ? feeback, please, from those who haven't posted yet...

thanks.

Shineone obviously u know u got skils man,
those verses were way cool but no one wantin to read a long ass verse dissin jay-z.
niggas got betta things to do.
ur lyrics be fire, type sum other shit n see if u get sum response.
peace

Steez
12-22-2006, 07:51 AM
this was weird...most emcees rap about themselves...you rapped about nas....kinda through me off...it was okay though...

mick212121
12-22-2006, 10:31 AM
good shit my dude

shineone
12-22-2006, 12:01 PM
thanks.

well, i just wanted to give props to the most dope rapper alive whom i admire. thats all.

peace

The apocalypse
01-01-2007, 05:19 AM
nice one!

uknow the net is like life in general..u go throu stages..lol i did this on the old board and got silenced

liked the creativity on ur lyrics..nothin basic..lovely

8/10

next timemake a name for urself by rappin bout other thingz..there to many stanelyz in here.lol