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The apocalypse
11-11-2006, 06:09 AM
Artist: Defmatic
Track: What is ur religion
Album/mixtape: The Book of Rage (promo)
Record lable: unsigned-m@tic entertainment
Format: WMA

enough ov that

herez the link

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=OFF3Z4JP

Please download and holla back wit the feed back..this is off the promo ish i had done wit a makeshift mic so am workin on get'n another one.

I took me 15min to upload so don be stingy wit them criticz
peace.

T-rade
11-11-2006, 06:24 AM
Once i get my hands on an USB port i will hear it

SeanPerelli
11-11-2006, 07:02 PM
Sounds like you got lyrics but where is the emotion and personality? Not hatin, though. Stay up

vexed less
11-11-2006, 11:05 PM
ur songs cool man, but a few probs....
first off the beat you used dusnt get with your lyrics, i mean thats Fabs beat for a love song, it dusnt go with the topic of religion.
Also u were flowin too fast man, that beat deserves slower lyrics.
Your lyrics where above average but i wasnt feeling the topic, or the title.
Over all your lyrics stood out, they where the highlight.
Keep at it homie, just take the good n leave the bad.
peace

vexed less
11-11-2006, 11:10 PM
Apoc post a street track for us man.
ima fan of ur lyrics when u post your raps. but religion is a touchy subject.....
if u got any other tracks post sum,
peace

The apocalypse
11-12-2006, 04:27 AM
sean peril.

i hear u..am workin on my delivery, flow and beat ridin...jus wannted a the lyrics to come out coz the mixtape aint officail yet..get u on the emotion thou.

Vexed Less
appreciate the feed..i get u..choose the beat coz am still workin on a couple ov aspect bout rhymin,delivery on all so it waz jus a test to see if i can spit correct no mater the beat..needed somethin to sit down an analyze and better my skil coz ama redo the mixtape after i iron out stuff

al be sure to post some street shit! soon fam..
peace.

The apocalypse
11-12-2006, 04:35 AM
Herez the intro for the mixtape

the quality need some work but thatz coz ov the mic i was usin..

Track: Born (intro)
Format:WMA

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=DPCP7SIZ

vexed less
11-13-2006, 12:25 AM
Yo Apoc, just finishd lisinin to ur intro...
personally i think it was straight up crazy man,
it realli appealled to me, your voice sounds sick with no beat.
still think you need to slow it down though, make it just a bit more clearer wat u say.
lyrics were hot n i think u can relli rhyme kid.
over all u realli impressed me man.

peace

The apocalypse
11-13-2006, 02:23 PM
Thanx fam.

ooDoe aka Doe Boy
11-18-2006, 05:30 PM
I def feel the lyrics, but need to work on delivery and writing the lyics to fit the beat ... I am not sure if you wrote the lyrics then picked a beat to use ... if so try writing to the beat

StillmaticJigga
11-18-2006, 08:45 PM
Quality was real ick ick... Prolly the mic. Flow was on point, and from what I understood, its a pretty dope track. I'd rock it more but the quality is ehhh. If you need help though, I can help mix em down for you. What mic and preamp you using? Check out my track so u can see how my quality is soundin, it iant nothing big studio like, but its good enough for the equipment I have right now. Good stuff..collabo on the way? hah

The apocalypse
11-19-2006, 07:40 AM
yeah mix it down fam al appreciate it

PII .. {oh lord!}

Audacity recorder

cleaned wit goldwave

make sift mic..took ear phones magnet here wire there..presto!

no booth did it in my room wit no help.

StillmaticJigga
11-19-2006, 04:38 PM
oh..lol i dunno then how much better i can make it soudn..lol but i could try..PM with the vocals in .aif or .wav form..and hten the instrumental in .mp3 is cool

The apocalypse
11-23-2006, 06:30 AM
lemi do somethin even better..

al do a verse.. u can hook up some instrumentalz throw ur verse in first or last and see if we can come out wit our own black republican type ish!

topic i was bulidin on was favorite emcee

al try do it MP3 format then Pm u wit it ..

peace..