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Cesar Chavez
12-30-2006, 01:07 PM
All is well, life is good//
Stopped the activities in the hood//
Living righteous, focus on school//
Last exams, intern and I am done...be cool//
I finally found love and love found me//
And this time it wasn’t the rattling love of money//
But hold on...give me one sec to get back//
Got to answer my phone and I’ll continue the track

Cap: This Mark
Con: Sup Cap? What up man?
Cap: What up Con? How;s thing man? Just writing a new hit ya know.
Con: Fuck that man! Got word back from one of our soldiers. Remember that guy ya had beef with?
Cap: Yeah, dude is serving life time in prison right?
Con: Wrong mufucker! He’s getting out!
Cap: when?
Con: Today at 3 PM
Cap: ah damn...ok you know what to do. Peace!
Con: Peace!

Oh my god how could this happen?//
Finally an oppurtunity to get out and make it with rapping//
Fuckkkkkkkkkkk!! Why? Gotdamn muthafucker!!
My past is back and surely is mad//
My life ain’t gonna last, I got to get strapped//
11Am and I feel like the rainman//
getting wet like pussy, this pure pain man//
was ready for fame, not this game man//
what time is it? 11.02//
what in hell am I suppose to do?//
I don’t wanna go back, I don’t wanna lie//
I amma visit my mom’s grave. Sup mom? A tear drops my eye//
This my time to show the angels I can fly//
But listen I ain’t gonna wait for a date with faith//
Forgive me for my sins mom, but I be at the prison gate//
Back home, I am cold sweating//
An idea, a smile and I am nod heading//

Ak: yo what up Cap? WTF is going on man? Ya know GC is riding with ya. Till the end man.
Cap: Yo man. I need to you to do something for me.
AK: Anything dog. Name it.
Cap: Cool. I need a gun and 3 bullets. And make sure I don’t need to reload. I don’t got alot of chances, ya know.
AK: Cool. 2 PM and I deliver.

This the time where I am facing my ends//
Why was I always the one who stood up when they made racist comment at my friends//
Why did I ordered him to suck a dick in front of his crowd?//
Why the sun is gone and I am surrounded by a black cloud?//
Having lunch while reminise when I was a kid//
I wasn’t dealing with a bunch of bullshit//
Carefree that life was destined for me//
I was always out for the quick money//
Why did I pimp his sis and bitch slapped his mother?//
Well I am ready to pay the prics, I don’t bother//
Listen... a car is spinning and my bell is ringing//
Its my boy AK, I tell him GC gonna end up winning//
I look at the gun and it hits me I am doing wrong//
Remember my original family and AK and Con//
Well its time to face my biggest enemy//
Gate goes open.....you remember me money?
*boom* *boom* *boom*

phone rings
Voice: Hello?
Con: is this the father of Mark?
Voice: Yes. Who’s this?
Con: I am Con. Uhm..don’t know how to tell this, but he killed himself. It was he wanted.
Voice: Damn!!!! *burst out in tears*

You didn’t expect that huh? Well let me tell//
I am still living good, ain’t no way I am going to hell//
I rather be dead with 3 bullets in my head//
In heaven then a living a life that I regret.
PEACE!

The apocalypse
12-30-2006, 01:28 PM
damn thatz crazy!

like this track,the way u played the phone convoz in..

painted an ill picture..waz tryna vizualize the scenez az i read thro the rhyme..

and wow! the supprise at the end.

good one fam.

Cesar Chavez
12-30-2006, 04:02 PM
lol. Thanx. Everyone talks about the end.

~y~
01-03-2007, 07:50 AM
No talking about offin yaself.

Nice

Cesar Chavez
01-03-2007, 07:53 AM
thanx. appreciated

Mayhs
01-03-2007, 12:42 PM
nice one bro...a few mistakes in the grammer n stuff but man thats wicked...nice twist at the end

and its a hard thing to write cos u can over saturate it with heavy lyrics but then u get a miscommunication with the emotions...the words u chose were perfect for ur concept

lol i read it whilst listenin to the end of cant forget about you

man u made me feel like freestlyin again and the end was where nat sings and the dad was cryin...lol symbolic

Cesar Chavez
01-03-2007, 01:53 PM
thanx.

And yes some grammar mistakes. Some were intentional though, cause hiphop isnt grammatical perfect. Some were just a lack of knowledge ion the english language and others were made by typing too fast (I copied it from an old board I use to go to)