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Cesar Chavez
12-30-2006, 01:08 PM
Its time y'all see a different side of me//
so get ready and take this ride with me//
where do I start, I really don't know//
7 years ago I lost my moms and start living for dough//
lost the one who put me on this earth//
forgot what she taught, just felt I was cursed//
with one blink I switched from good till selling and hanging//
with different crews and before I knew I was gangbangin//
it became "what up gangster?" and forgot my real name//
well known in my city, on top of my game//
earning money in different ways with no shame//
and just a half year later my grandma died//
had to walk pass my mothers fresh grave and cried//
in this nightmare I was glad my cousin was near//
thats my 'boy, when he in pain I shed a tear//
my heart turned hard, it turned stone cold//
like my dick when I unfold the playboy centerfold//
Fuck evrything, saw it all as a challenge//
Dead or alive?.... it was all in balance//
thats how I got my alias Capital crazy//
in half a year I did a 180//
and ofcourse there was night I wanted to leave//
but they pulled me back in with one pull of the sleave//
this ain't it, a couple of years late my grandpa was gone//
Oh God!! I am loosing them one by one//
and one by one I reach another depth//
my cousin in tears, heard he followed my footsteps//
started to realize it was time for me to change//
looked at my life, it was all so strange//
14 years long evrything went good//
and now I was considered the king of my hood//
but not evrything is what it actually seems//
started to change when the devil appeared in my dreams//
had enough of it, gave away my stash of rolexes//
continued my job in which I pay normal taxes//
I couldn't live with all the mess in me//
never woulda make it to heaven, hell was my destiny//
that wasn't in my plans, so evry confrontation I let it slide//
the only thing I wanted was me and my family to reunite//
evrything went fine till the doc said my grandma had cancer//
another visit of the killer of my mother and for 1 sec I turned gangster//
I never forget at 10 Am I was by your side//
and 2 hours later the medic brought the message you died//
couldn't belive it and before I Knew I cried//
but I stayed mr Jeckyll, I didn't turned to Hide//
got more to tell, but this is one part of my story//
can't end it to say to one specific girl that I am sorry//

The apocalypse
12-30-2006, 01:21 PM
damn son!

thaz some deep ish!

type a lyrics tha mit make a dude jus say fuc the world..smoke a blunt and pass out

Cesar Chavez
12-30-2006, 04:01 PM
hahaha thanx man. Much appreciated.

Mayhs
01-03-2007, 12:45 PM
nice one man...it flows like a soap and u dont want it to end

Cesar Chavez
01-03-2007, 01:54 PM
nice one man...it flows like a soap and u dont want it to end

and thanx again. Very much appreciated.

Good to see some people giving feedback.

Mayhs
01-03-2007, 02:34 PM
nps bro ill hold u down

u know what a soap is right?

Cesar Chavez
01-04-2007, 12:06 PM
nps bro ill hold u down

u know what a soap is right?

uhh some grammatical errors doesn't make me a moron, son. lol lol. Yeah I know.

Bre
01-04-2007, 02:41 PM
Its dope, its real I can tell that. Although I take that 'gangsta' shit with a little salt, no beef or anything. But everyone is alway's a gangsta online, and most are not.

Further more the most of your rhymes are not that good, but in this shit its more about the content. So its cool.

Cesar Chavez
01-04-2007, 02:45 PM
Its dope, its real I can tell that. Although I take that 'gangsta' shit with a little salt, no beef or anything. But everyone is alway's a gangsta online, and most are not.

Further more the most of your rhymes are not that good, but in this shit its more about the content. So its cool.

Thanx. I appreciate this kinda shit. An honest answer. I don't consider myself a gangsta. lol. Not even in those days. lol.

Bre
01-04-2007, 02:47 PM
You did had some dope rhymes too but theyre over shadowd by rhymes like good and hood, that's way too simple shit. Although I know its harder to rhyme in a different language then your own.

Cesar Chavez
01-04-2007, 02:51 PM
You did had some dope rhymes too but theyre over shadowd by rhymes like good and hood, that's way too simple shit. Although I know its harder to rhyme in a different language then your own.


Yeah I feel you. But I also tried to keep it simple a bit. SOme unintentional though. But personally I think these kinda rhymes/songs need to be simple. People need to feel it, not think about difficult metaphores and all.

Thats just my opinion though.

i.e. I think Nas _ Dance is an amazing song, but the lyrics are quite easy. But its from the heart, so that makes it ill. Not wanna compare my writings with Nas' though. lol

Bre
01-04-2007, 02:53 PM
Yeah aight I peep your point, your def right.

With these kind of songs its about the message. Your brought that over pretty well.