View Full Version : New Track --**Feel Me**
tri~state
01-06-2007, 07:57 PM
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=400323&songID=4855274
i did this last night. its not finished..this iz more like a preview than a full track.
honest criticism is welcome. hit me up!
vexed less
01-06-2007, 08:48 PM
rel nice......again u came through with the lyrics.....
u be rel consistant wid hot lyrics....shit be relivant, n soundin good.
" i look for guidence from my grandma,/
she's livin proof that its survival of the fittest, she survived it with my grandpa,/"
nice flowin...rode the beat rel fuckin well.
i cant give u feedback on them beats though......ul have to wait fo Shadow.
peace
tri~state
01-06-2007, 09:34 PM
good lookin out
Shadowapocalypse
01-07-2007, 01:09 AM
Aiight, let me see what this joint is workin' wit playa....
Shadowapocalypse
01-07-2007, 01:12 AM
Man, Tri, you are ill on the mic duke! This joint is off the hook. I co-sign Vexed comments, for real.
As far as the beat go, excellent choice for the beat kid. You hittin' em out the park with your choices for beats so far duke. I've always loved that beat....
9.5 out of 10....
tri~state
01-07-2007, 01:16 AM
good lookin out son...i neva even heard that beat b4 tho. i got this crisis instrumental mixtape and i just went nuts wit his beats. i kinda like writin to beats i never heard b4 so my ideas are fresh and i dont wind up soundin like the actual song. again ggod looks on the feed son.
Shadowapocalypse
01-07-2007, 01:18 AM
Yeah, well you got an ill beat CD...
Khrysis is a beast on the boards....
tri~state
01-07-2007, 01:26 AM
yea man i lik soulful beats..have u ever heard my drop called "real talk"?? its a crisis beat and its fuckin drippin wit soul...i'll up it in case u havent heard it.
vexed less
01-07-2007, 05:26 AM
good lookin out son...i neva even heard that beat b4 tho. i got this crisis instrumental mixtape and i just went nuts wit his beats. i kinda like writin to beats i never heard b4 so my ideas are fresh and i dont wind up soundin like the actual song. again ggod looks on the feed son.
see i cant do that.....i can write with no beat perfectly..
but when i write to a beat with no verses just the instrumental shit gets wack....
i can kick sum crazy shit over another mc's verses but thats sorta cheatin....stealin they flow n shit.
shit is tight man, lyrics and beat. flow real tight.
Salty Enoj Risan
01-08-2007, 06:21 AM
you got like an Iraqi slash Talib kweli flow going on I'll have to listen again
tri~state
01-09-2007, 02:31 AM
lol@iraqui slash talib kweli...good looks on the feed tho bruh
Mayhs
01-09-2007, 06:40 PM
DAMN bro!
thats that!
amazing choice of beat and ur flow goes on their like water on a riverbed...
a few criticisms...breath control a bit but u said this wasnt finished so i cant say that...a bit more emotion maybe...
lyrics were dope though...its not a track to display ur full lyrical potential though but u came good on it
Mayhs
01-09-2007, 06:42 PM
need to add: damn man that beat is soulful and could u up/rap on the other beat too?
i love soulful beats
tri~state
01-11-2007, 12:14 AM
bump
tri~state
05-29-2007, 08:48 PM
uppin for 4anybody
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